主语遗漏导致的逻辑混乱

a.不可遗漏动作的执行者：
 ——To determine its respiratory quotient, the organism was… (the organism determine…?)
 ——Having completed the study, the bacteria were of no further interest.  (the bacteria completed the study?)
b.文献引用尽量准确、具体：
  ——cells were broken by as previously described[9] 应改为：cells were broken by ultrasonic treatment as previously described[9].
 
时态
 
a.现在时：具有普遍的意义推论或结论：
 ——The experimental and theoretical values for the yields agree well.
 ——Our data suggest that the reaction rate may be determined by the amount of oxygen available.
b.过去时：所概述推论的有效性只是针对本次特定的研究：
 ——In the first series of trials, the experimental values were all lower than the theoretical predictions.
 
模糊
 
避免使用Thoughts on ..., Regarding …, Study…, 等
 
标题
 
Bad: Action of antibiotics on bacteria
Bad: Preliminary observations on the effect of certain antibiotics on various species of bacteria
Good: Action of Streptomycin on Mycobacterium tuberculosis
Better: Inhibition of growth of Mycobacterium tuberculosis by Streptomycin 
 
题名：介词问题
 
Bad: Linear programming method of optimization of systems of partial differential equation
Good: Linear programming method for optimization of partial differential equation systems (偏微分方程系统最优化的线性程序设计方法)
 
Bad: Formulation of equations of vertical motion of finite element form for vehicle-bridge interaction system
Good: Finite element based formulations for vehicle-bridge interaction system considering vertical motion 车桥相互作用系统有限元形式的竖向运动方程
 
题名：缩略语的使用
 
The effects of air pollutants on taking of SARS GEE
用广义估计方程研究大气污染对SARS发病的影响
GEE—generalized estimating equation
 
The quarantine measures and preventative countermeasures of preventing the propagation of RIFA through international shippings
防止红火蚊随国际航行船舶传播的检疫措施与防控对策
RIFA—red imported fire ant
 
题名类型
 
a.名词词组: Inositol trisp

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