Fat rats: Are their hormones different?
•  Acceptable
Relationship of luteinizing hormone to obesity in the Zuker rat
•  Unacceptable
  The effects of hormones on mouse behavior
•  Acceptable
    Estrogen stimulates intensity of nose-twitch courtship behavior in mice
•  Unacceptable
  The effects of CCR on the growth and development of tobacco
•  Acceptable
  Cinnamoyl-CoA reductase affects the growth and development of tobacco

7-7
举例：
脱落酸与植物细胞的抗氧化防护
植物细胞中脱落酸的抗氧化防护作用
CHS基因起源初探及其在被子植物中的进化分析
查耳酮合成酶基因与被子植物的进化关系
华南云食传粉生态学
华南云食(Laesalpinia crista L.)花结构与传粉木蜂
的互动适应
好例子
WAF1, a potential mediator of p53 tumor suppression
  Traffic signals for lymphocyte re-circulation and leukocyte emigration: the multi-step paradigm
Processing of X-ray diffraction data collected in oscillation mode
  Positional cloning of the mouse obese gene and its human homolog
   p21 Cdk-interacting protein Cip1 is a potent inhibitor of G1 cyclin-dependent kinase

7-8
示例：
　　1）视网膜小血管变化是冠状动脉疾病的一个指标
　　Original: Retinal arteriolar changes are an indicator of coronary artery disease
　　问题：标题中应尽量避免使用活用动词 (active verb), 即谓语动词，一般采用名词短语型结构。
　　Revised: Retinal arteriolar changes as an indicator of coronary artery disease
　　2) 用大剂量氨甲喋呤治疗急性淋巴细胞白血病的初步体会
　　Original: Preliminary experience in using high dose of methotrexate to treat ALL
　　问题：(1) 应尽量避免使用"初步体会"，"初步研究"，"初步经验"之类没有实际意义的词; (2) 除了像AIDS, DNA等已通用的缩略语外，标题中应尽量避免使用缩略语，如ALL应写全称；（3）尽量避免使用动词
　　Revised: High dose methotrexate therapy in acute lymphocytic leukemia
　　或：Use of high dose methotrexate in (the) treatment of acute lymphocytic leukemia
　　3) 关于饮食中钾含量与血压关系的研究
　　Original: A research of the relationship between the content of potassium in diet and blood pressure
　　问题：（1）具体的研究一般用study表述 (research一般作不可数名词处理，如much re

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